.... OF THESE WORDS:
AND THEN
Using and or then repeatedly at the beginning of a sentence can kill your narrative!
Defend your narrative from a vicious attack of and and then!
a. Delete the word and. Start your sentence with the next word!
And I was hungry too. I was hungry too.
b. Delete the word then. Replace it with a more specific transition for showing the passage of time or the sequence of events. You have a great list here!
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