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Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Revision: Transitions



    .... OF THESE WORDS:         
         AND      THEN


Using and or then repeatedly at the beginning of a sentence can kill your narrative!
Defend your narrative from a vicious  attack of and and then
a.  Delete the word and.  Start your sentence with the next word!
And I was hungry too.                I was hungry too.

b. Delete the word then. Replace it with a more specific transition for showing the passage of time or the sequence of events. You have a great list here!

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